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I sent to Deanna and it wasn't returned


edit - has now been returned!!!!!

some people think mine is a poem , but it isn't..it's a short piece of prose..

:o))

Will have to get my Daughter or OH to open a file or document or whatever it is to put all your writing/poems in so I have them all together.I am absolute pants when it comes to the computer lol But I am learning .
I would like to thank Jill for doing this...it is getting my brain concentrating on something interesting instead of a lot of tripe !!

i haven't heard from Deanna but my mail to her was returned so perhaps there is a problem with the servers..

ooer - didn't do a word count!!!

Has anybody had a problem with Deanna's e mail address? I had it returned.

I haven't had anything from deanna either

Haven't had anything from Deanna.

Jane, as long as we both use our full 'titles' you should be OK.

Have we decided how we are going to do critiques? I think it is going to be difficult. So far I have seen nothing to criticise, all praise so far!!!!


I do wish that I had been brave enough to go over the word limit though, I could have written a lot more but thought we were constrained by the 500 or thereabouts words.

Ann & Deanna, have read yours and they are brilliant, I did enjoy them. Are we supposed to comment here or reply to each individual work? I'm a little vague on that, and don't fancy reading through the whole thread again, it's all I can do to keep up with you all on here lol!
I haven't even decided what piece I shall submit yet.
One submission I could not read because windows won't open the file, so have sent reply to submitter, who will know who they are. Hope I can get to read the work.

Rose, no problem at all opening it.

ooh 2 Anns lol.I hope I don't get confused!!
Ann GG...Loved both ....both from the heart.
Just off to read the next.

cutting and pasting and posting!!! feel like I'm doing that patting your head and rubbing your stomach at the same time - lovely articles so far - enjoyed them all!!!

I am just going to check if I can open, I have sent to everyone but had Deanna's returned. Please let me know if you can't open, I forgot when I sent the attachment that not everyone has Vista.

thanks Stella - appreciated!!!

Panic. Am just catching up, reading emails and this.

you are right Ann.. one made me cry.....

i loved the descriptive writing in the other, the imagery was lovely

thank you for sharing

xx

Ann ( in Glos) I will probably have to send you mine again, most of those I sent to originally can't open, so am re-sending let me know if you need me to do so.

xx

Are you not sending to everyone Anne.

I have received but not checked yet if I can open, Roses, Stella's and Mags But I haven't looked as I want to send mine, if I read and they are too good I may not want to send mine Lol!!!!

well I've done two now!!! sent them to Stella and Rose - one might make you laugh - the other might make you cry!!!!

also sent to Deanna and Jen - that's all the email addresses I have

I'm going to be useless at the 'criticism' bit :( I think we need an outside critic lol. It is different when you sit in college and critique a famous author's work , you know it makes no odds to them what YOU think, they are already famous, lauded , quite probably deceased .

I think I can 'take it' (or maybe not :( ) , I am not sure I can 'dish it out' lol... where do we start with that?!

xx